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Monster!
I hope that Ray won't tie me to the tether ball again I thought as I crossed the field. He would tie kids to the tether ball then play and just leave them there. I finally got to the poll and Ray took a kid into the woods then came back without him. I nervously walked up to the poll and cleared my throat. Next thing I knew he had me on the ground on my back. He took me to the woods. I looked for the kid that went before me but I couldn't find him.
We finally reached a clearing and Ray trew me across it. Amazing because it was probably a mile across and completely round. I immediately jumped into a fighting position. But he was still across the clearing with a lion like smirk on his face. Then he slowly changed. His whole body now matched his smile. Except it had a snake for a tail. He had a golden coat that shined in the sun. The snakes scales were a gleaming poisonousness green. Then he slowly came towards me. I tried to fake him out but nearly got burnt. There goes my normal life I thought. How was I suppose to get out of this? How could I survive? Then he blew out of his nostrils and I blacked out.
Very good, except it should read "Ray threw me across it." Not "through"
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